Daisy haiku
09 Dec 2011 7 Comments
in haiku Tags: daisy haiku, haiku, kids haiku, kids poems, piedhillprawns, poetry
the bees buzz buzily
I wonder if they’re making honey
for me
My niece has been reading my haiku and decided to have a crack at it herself. She is 9 years old and lives in northern NSW.
up, take a breath and down again, kick!
gliding through the water
dragon-fly dances
the flowers giggle
Cool ku Daisy.
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Dec 09, 2011 @ 14:53:56
Delightful haiku
Dec 11, 2011 @ 08:57:13
They are aren’t they Gabe. She picked up the writing of a moment really quickly. I love seeing life through the eyes of a 9year old again.
Dec 12, 2011 @ 18:14:29
Fantastic, Andrew. Absolutely wonderful, Daisy. My 9 year old daughter has been writing poetry lately, they have such amazing insights.
Jan 03, 2012 @ 08:02:33
I really liked your daughter’s stream of conscious poem you posted last year. I hope she is writing more. Cheers Mark
Dec 25, 2011 @ 21:10:10
The child’s eye is a keen one. Loved this mate!
Jan 02, 2012 @ 22:29:34
She’s got some good stuff happening. I hope she writes more.